New poem... do you think it's good?

It's good and it mostly flows very well. What makes it special is that the poem is actually therapy, almost like your trying to sort it all out on a psychiatrists couch in your mind. One minute you're breaking away from her, the next your not, then you are then you're not---------You show us what a difficult problem it is for you, and for many of us who have the same problem.Then you resolve it the only way you could. Take the advice from someone who's been there-----Love transcends all------it has to!-----''LOVE TRANSCENDS''---Good Job, and Good Luck!-----------------------------------…